So I'm assigned to write the rough draft of my work today, to have at least made an outline... and I've pretty much got nothing. I wrote an essay/survey about submission, but Master was not please, it was not the assignment He set before me.I found a random poetry generator, and what do you know, it's pretty good to be a computer program.
this is what it came up with
So evil below the dreamscape
Very dull beside the mud
I pull vaporous eruptions below the clouds
Yo! The vision will die
So florescent beneath the light
We meet wanting graves about the earth
Alass, Alack! The stink is coming
So evil below the dreamscape
I see vaporous knives in the trees
Can you dig it? The bitch is no more
alone altered
blurring at the edges
the next life waiting
For whose sake
the victim
miss his chance
trying to remember
And it kind of put something in motion for me, it brought some images (even though it doesn't make a whole lot of sense) that I would like to put into play in a few things I'm interested in writing about. So... what is it about this jumble of words that I like?
The idea of a poem about a grave, and the emotions associated with it appeals to me. Maybe not emotions, per se, I can sense colors in what I'm looking for, and smells, and possibly a few cold calculating remarks, but I'm not sure.. I really liked the line, "the bitch is no more" it really seemed to embody the feeling of the entire generated poem.
If the dogs would stop whining to go in and out I would be able to get a lot more done!!! they're driving me nuts tonight. I have a bit of stuff together though, so I'm happy with some of the progress I'm looking at. I'll have to post it once I get it together. I want a revised draft, :)
I wish I had these!
Aren't they, well... SEXY?
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