Day 3: short draft

Day 1: Thesis

I appreciate my Husband and Master for working to pay the bills, bettering me through training, and always being there for me.



--------------------------------------------- categories  (Day 2: Outline)

intro

1. Going to work / paying the bills /   financial/social buffer  Filling my/our needs (financial and otherwise) sex/food/bills/shelter/school     -even when He doesn't want to-
2. Training me / making me a better person / helping me manage my mood swings through discipline / keeping me in line / holding me responsible for my actions/knowing what is best for me following through with it/making me follow through on it. puts me in my place when I need it
3.  Supports me  emotionally/in my decisions/in times of need/loss

1. filling both our needs (and more when necessary) (and wants when possible)
2. because He makes me a better person
3. because He always has my back, even when I'm wrong/hurt/bitchy/sleepy

conclusion

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Day 3: put this together into a draft

My husband has always done his best to make sure that our household is in proper working order. He never stops going when it comes to work, family obligations, or even outside commitments. I don't thank him as often as I should, and I often take for granted the things he does and the sacrifices he makes for his family.  (It's not even possible to thank him sincerely enough for what he does, and I often take for granted the things he does and the sacrifices he makes (has made?))

Will post when finished. Working on notebook paper for the moment.





(Jessi, this is an encomium)
Also, this may help in your essay as well 
http://advancedlifeskills.com/blog/67-ways-to-make-him-feel-super-respected/  (for me to read later, looks interesting)
http://www.essaywritinghelp.com/
http://www.essaywritinghelp.com/fiveparagraph.htm
http://www.essaywritinghelp.com/tips.htm