I just realized that it would be cool if I could plan my story out by 31 chapters, and then focus on each section/ chapter at a time for 31 days. then I wouldn't be stuck feeling like I'm working on the beginning for too long, without moving the story along. I would know where I stand... The problem is, I actually don't know where I'm going with it. I don't know if there is some outside influence that steps in and forces them to work together, if there's some conflict in the world outside their lives that makes things change, or after He has trained her, make her realize it's not exactly what she was expecting, or something else.
Maybe He really does do other things that she's completely unaware of, because He only lets her out of the box for a few hours each day until she's trained because He does still have other things to do, and isn't just a rich snob looking for a live plaything to train as a pet.
Maybe He can control her if He wishes until she drinks from His chest, and then she is able to fight Him back (meaning it's a mental drain on both of them, and she may not lose/win every time depending on what they're fighting over and how important it is to either of them, but emotions change the capability to fight it, so if she's angry, even though she really doesn't want to do it, He is more easily able to force her mind.) UNTIL He gives a (specific, personal) order and she obeys it without being forced. Once this happens, He is again guaranteed to be able to force her to do anything He wants to. This is the 4th and final mark. They are now bound to each other. This order must be something personal, that requires that she willing give up something important to her that she would not want to share with anyone else to Him, without the expectation of getting it back.
Mark One: He bites her.
Mark Two: He allows her to feed from Him.
Mark Three: He allows her to take her fill from His chest.
Mark Four: He asks, and She willingly gives Him something personal without the expectation of getting it back or any type of payment for it.
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He punishes her for something (ugh I hate not having a good fuck up of some sort to punish for but I'm so bad at this lately) and stakes her spread eagle naked in the full moonlight. Of course, at first, the moon isn't out, so It's just cold and windy and she's freezing and hates every second and how that cold chill goes into her bones and stays there for days no matter what she does afterward. But then! the moon comes up, and her body starts trying to change, even though she is wearing her anklet, and all the cuffs holding her are silver. The silver keeps her from becoming a werewolf, but under the skin, her body is trying to melt her bone and muscle into her dog form. It's the worst pain she's felt without having something from the outside actually harm her. The beautiful moon, her only friend, has even turned against her, now. It is big and beautiful, and shines a silver reflection of the sun, the only silver that she has ever been able to take comfort in, and now it turns her own nature against her, instead of allowing her to become her natural, comfortable form like it normally does. He leaves her there the whole night to suffer for what she did. People hear her screams and know it's a slave being punished. They shut their windows, mutter that it probably serves her right, and hope that she learns her lesson she and gets what she deserves the first time so that she doesn't keep them awake all night twice.
He has her restraints staked into the ground at the crest of a hill, so that He can see her from the balcony off of His bedroom. The ground is a black-green, and her naked body shines white in the moonlight. Some of her screams sound like pained howls trying to break loose from a human. That's what they are but it is one of her more pitiful sounds. Her whole body is covered in goosebumps, and He can even make out her nipples from His high perch thanks to His *accurate eyesight, but once the moon is torturing her, He takes no pleasure from her pain. This is not a punishment that will be used lightly. It will haunt her physically and mentally for a long time. He will only use this for times when she absolutely defies Him and needs to know above all that He owns her and has every right to do what He wishes to her. When she feels she deserves better, and tries to make it so. He can't escape her screams either, and is anxious for this night to be over as much as she is.
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It was so cold. She shifted again, trying to move her body in a position where she could keep herself warm. The ground was wet with moisture from the air. The dew felt as if it were freezing into small droplets of ice on her back, in the cold chilled air. She hated the cold. Her body would survive easily, but she could feel the chill in her bones. Her body would ache for days now, even after she was warm again, it would still feel cold.
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